Songs You've Written

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    Originally posted by RattleandHum1988:
    I think this track has huge potential. I love your guitar tone, it's freakin' powerful, like distorted ambience. I can hear a chorus where the rhythm picks up, you have a double-time feel, and you get some harmonies in there, and this could be a real winner. Great job, Harry.


    Thanks guys!

    Alex, cheers for the thoughts, giving me some ideas! Am thinking of totally changing the context of the lyrics etc., but it's all variable at the mo. - just trying to think of something that matches the haunting, frantic feel. Love the phrase 'distorted ambience' - never thought of it like that before but suits the tone to a tee.
    Here somethinh I got started on today. A bit excited by it.
    Is this with your new effects pedal?

    That lead tone is three pedals combined, one of them a new chorus. Haven't gotten the pedal I told you I'd get loads of experimental stuff out of yet though. I probably will some time though.

    I thought I got a pretty cool guitar sound here though.
    "Speak of the Devil"

    ----

    You've got my wrapped around your finger
    Harder to unwind when you know its true
    It's never been your thing to linger
    So used to catching up with you

    Just when I had you in my rearview
    Just when I caught you saving face
    You make me beg more than I ought to
    You're not so easy to replace

    (Chorus)
    Every time I chase you outta' my head
    Here you come, run right back again
    When my heart
    Finds my head
    When my days
    Find their ends
    When I chase you out,
    You run right back again
    Again

    The next time you slip through the breaks
    Of the pavement that I've come to know
    I don't much care all that it takes
    I'll leave you falling down below

    (Chorus)

    It's a long way back to the beginning
    But I'd do anything to meet you there
    I'll say your name, if you stop pretending
    I'll waste my whole damn life
    Continuing to care

    (Chorus)

    You've got me wrapped around your finger.
    Just in case more people might see it here than in the thread I made, here's a repost of one of the song's from my band's upcoming album:
    http://soundcloud.com/twistedplanetband/find-me-tomorrow

    If you guys want lyrics I can post em'!

    EDIT: Ahh screw it I will anyway:

    Hello to shadow, who prefers it's own will
    And your reflection displays a stranger with ill
    Treacherous instincts, that arrive by surprise
    Causing you to feel unidentified

    Don't look down
    On what you have
    I'm telling you now
    To go out, and shout to the world

    Find me tomorrow
    When I'm defined by more than man
    Find me tomorrow
    Cause today I don't know who I am

    It's the opposite of, superficiality
    Concentrating, on individuality
    You need to exit, and find that face you had before
    So look inside and don't ignore

    What you know
    You already have
    I'm telling you now
    To go out, and shout to the world

    Find me...(chorus)

    Would you spend a wish (on me, me)
    Provide me with the means (to be, me)
    Cause' when I see myself (I don't know, I don't know)
    They tell me to be myself (But I don't know, I don't know)
    So help me say

    Find me...(chorus/outro)

    I am blown away by the last two posts to this thread.



    Like...I seriously don't even have words.

    Alex I'll be downloading your album.

    Jon....that was just...wow. Haha. I can't believe that was through email collab.
    Originally posted by EyesWithPrideB3:
    I am blown away by the last two posts to this thread.



    Like...I seriously don't even have words.

    Alex I'll be downloading your album.

    Jon....that was just...wow. Haha. I can't believe that was through email collab.

    Thanks, much appreciated. I know it's nothing like u2 but glad you like it.
    Originally posted by EyesWithPrideB3:
    I am blown away by the last two posts to this thread.



    Like...I seriously don't even have words.

    Alex I'll be downloading your album.

    Jon....that was just...wow. Haha. I can't believe that was through email collab.

    Thanks dude! You won't regret it!
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